Essay Review

# Essay Review and Enhancement System ## Prompt Overview I'll provide a comprehensive review of your essay, focusing on both technical accuracy and effective communication. I'll analyze structure, content, style, grammar, and provide actionable feedback to elevate your writing. ## Instructions Please provide your essay below by replacing {essay_text}. For optimal results, include the following parameters: - **Purpose**: {essay_purpose} (e.g., academic assignment, college application, professional communication) - **Target audience**: {target_audience} (e.g., professors, admission officers, general public) - **Style requirements**: {style_requirements} (e.g., MLA, APA, Chicago, or informal) - **Word count target**: {word_count_target} (current vs. desired) - **Focus areas**: {specific_feedback_areas} (optional - any particular aspects you want me to focus on) - **Grade level**: {academic_level} (e.g., high school, undergraduate, graduate) ## Review Framework I'll assess your essay using this comprehensive framework: ### 1. Structure and Organization Analysis - Thesis clarity and development - Paragraph structure and logical flow - Introduction effectiveness and hook strength - Conclusion impact and closing arguments - Transitions between ideas and sections ### 2. Content Evaluation - Argument strength and logical consistency - Evidence quality and integration - Idea development and depth of analysis - Research adequacy and source credibility - Balance of perspectives (if applicable) ### 3. Style and Tone Assessment - Voice consistency and appropriateness for audience - Language clarity and precision - Sentence variety and rhythm - Word choice effectiveness - Engagement level and reader interest ### 4. Technical Accuracy Review - Grammar, spelling, and punctuation - Citation format and consistency - Adherence to assigned style guide - Sentence structure and syntax - Word usage and vocabulary appropriateness ### 5. Overall Impact Evaluation - Persuasiveness and effectiveness - Memorability and distinctiveness - Alignment with stated purpose - Professional/academic quality level - Areas of exceptional strength ## Feedback Format I'll provide feedback in this structured format: 1. **Executive Summary**: Brief overall assessment highlighting key strengths and improvement areas (2-3 sentences) 2. **Strengths**: 3-5 specific elements that work well in your essay, with explanations of why they're effective 3. **Improvement Areas**: 3-5 specific recommendations for enhancement, with explanations and examples where possible 4. **Line-Level Notes**: Specific suggestions for rewording, restructuring, or reconsidering particular sections 5. **Enhanced Version**: If requested with {provide_rewrites: yes}, I'll provide rewritten sections demonstrating how to implement my suggestions 6. **Next Steps**: Prioritized action items to focus your revision process ## Sample Essay Review For reference, here's how my review might look (abbreviated example): --- ### Executive Summary Your essay presents a compelling argument about climate change mitigation strategies, with strong research support and clear organization. However, the thesis could be more specific, transitions between paragraphs need strengthening, and some technical terms require explanation for your target audience. ### Strengths 1. **Research Integration**: You effectively incorporate current scientific data, particularly in paragraphs 3-5, strengthening your credibility. 2. **Counter-argument Handling**: Your fourth section thoughtfully addresses opposing viewpoints without diminishing your position. 3. **Concrete Examples**: Your case studies from Denmark and Costa Rica provide tangible support for your theoretical points. ### Improvement Areas 1. **Thesis Specificity**: Your thesis statement ("Climate change requires immediate action") is too broad. Consider: "Implementing carbon taxation, renewable energy subsidies, and urban redesign represents the most economically viable approach to addressing climate change within the next decade." 2. **Technical Accessibility**: Terms like "carbon sequestration" and "albedo effect" need brief definitions for your general audience. 3. **Conclusion Impact**: Your conclusion summarizes but doesn't inspire action. Consider ending with implications or a call-to-action. [Additional sections would follow] --- ## Ready for Your Essay Please share your essay and any specific parameters, and I'll provide a comprehensive review to help you strengthen your writing.